My first story here..

So this is my first story for you. It comes straight from my heart, so please tell me what you think.
I'm going to write it in finnish and in english, so that as many as possible understand it, and because I write in finnish, since I'm from Finland, da.
But here it comes:

Meillä oli niin hauskaa yhdessä. Ainakin minun mielestäni. Muistan sen yhdenkin kerran, kun me eksyimme tahalteen ja löysimme sen maagisen paikan. Sanoit minulle ettet ollut aikoihin nauranut niin paljon. Muuttiko sitten sairauteni sen kaiken? Pilasinko ystävyytemme kertomalla sinulle? Jos olisin tiennyt, en olisi kertonut. Mutta halusin olla avoin. Halusin että tiedät minusta mahdollisimman paljon. Mutta niin kuin sanonta kuuluu, tieto tuo tuskaa. Tunnen itseni idiootiksi. Miksei sinulla ole aikaa minulle? Kerro totuus, sillä valhe vain satuttaa enemmän. En tiedä mitä tehdä. En halua menettää sinua, mutta tuntuu kuin ajautuisimme erillemme.. I love you, don't leave me. Please.



We had so much fun together. Or I thought so. I remember that one time, when we got lost on purpose and found that magical place. You said to me you hadn't laughed so much in ages. Did my disease change it all? Did I ruin our friendship by telling you? If I had known, I wouldn't have told. But I wanted to be open. I wanted you to know as much as possible about me. But as the saying goes, knowledge brings pain. I feel like an idiot. Why don't you have time for me? Tell me the truth, because a lie only hurts more. I don't know what to do. I don't want to lose you, but it feels like we're drifting further and further apart.. I love you, don't leave me. Please.



Please tell me what you think? I'd really appreciate it. Thank you!

Katori