-Katori♥
torstai 23. joulukuuta 2010
maanantai 15. marraskuuta 2010
Second story : D this is a new version of an old story though.. so it's not as good as it used to be^^"
Kathy was a girl who lived in an attic. She was all alone there, day after day. She didn't even know why she didn't leave there. Guess the attic was just too safe and the world outside too scary. Kathy didn't remember seeing another person ever. She didn't remember how she'd gotten to the attic, either. Actually, the only thing she remembered was the days spent at the attic. It was quite lonely and sometimes Kathy cried, but she was never sad for long.
But one day, when she was singing to herself, she heard a sudden click and saw light coming from behind her. She looked over her shoulder and there he was, a boy with a camera, taking pictures with a polaroid camera. Kathy's heart skipped a beat, and she walked to the boy.
But when she tried to ask the boy's name, no voice came from her throat. And when she tried to touch the boy's arm, her hand went right through it. And the boy didn't seem to notice a thing. But when she looked at the picture the camera had give, she saw herself, for the first time, with her blond long curls and blue, sincere eyes.
Suddenly the boy started talking. He asked who the girl in the picture was. Kathy tried to shout her name, but couldn't. Something was stopping her. The boy shrugged and went away. But the next day he came back. And this time he talked longer, and took some photos from the room to see Kathy again. She was so happy she smiled for the first time ever!
Finally she had found another one like her. Well not exactly, the boy wasn't as pale and had shorter hair, but he was close enough to her.
The same pattern continued for some weeks. But then one day the boy didn't come. Kathy shed her first tears after seeing the boy for the first time, and wondered what had happened. She was restless and couldn't even sing like she used to. This was all new to her. What was that feeling inside her that ate her heart like a beast? What was this feeling that made it feel like she'd died if she didn't see the boy again. But she decided to wait a little longer. Just for a little longer.
But when the boy didn't come the next day either, she got really sad and cried a lot that night. The next day she gathered up her courage and decided to go looking for the boy. She went to the attic door, opened it and stepped to the stairs behind it. This was a start of a new adventure and her heart was beating like crazy, but she didn't care.
She walked around the empty halls, they looked like from a school. There was no one around. Then she turned around a corner, and finally, saw him. Kathy's heart started beating faster and faster. She started running onwards, but then suddenly jerked to a stop when she saw a girl next to the boy. This girl had goldbrown curls, and her green eyes were so deep. She looked like the perfect human beign, and Kathy started to back down, not knowing what to do.
The girl wrapped her arms around the boys right arm and gave him a little peck on the cheek. Kathy screamed. She had never screamed before. The voice was high but like a key, not annoying or squeky at all. But this time the boy heard her, and looked at the hall. When he saw nothing, he took his camera and took a quick pic. On the picture there was a blond girl, in a white one piece dress, crying her heart out.
The boy's heart skipped a beat and he yelled a name. Kathy's heart stopped. It was her name. The boy shaked the girl off of his arm and ran to Kathy. He explained that he hadn't had time to visit because of problems at school and home, so much work, but he promised to come see her whenever he could, if she only stopped crying. Kathy smiled and nodded while the boy took another picture.
And from that day on, their love bloomed beautifully, even though they couldn't even touch each other, and Kathy could be seen only through camera, but the boy took a lot of pictures and told her stories, and she sang to him in exchange.
Happy endings are the best, don't you think? ; )
But one day, when she was singing to herself, she heard a sudden click and saw light coming from behind her. She looked over her shoulder and there he was, a boy with a camera, taking pictures with a polaroid camera. Kathy's heart skipped a beat, and she walked to the boy.
But when she tried to ask the boy's name, no voice came from her throat. And when she tried to touch the boy's arm, her hand went right through it. And the boy didn't seem to notice a thing. But when she looked at the picture the camera had give, she saw herself, for the first time, with her blond long curls and blue, sincere eyes.
Suddenly the boy started talking. He asked who the girl in the picture was. Kathy tried to shout her name, but couldn't. Something was stopping her. The boy shrugged and went away. But the next day he came back. And this time he talked longer, and took some photos from the room to see Kathy again. She was so happy she smiled for the first time ever!
Finally she had found another one like her. Well not exactly, the boy wasn't as pale and had shorter hair, but he was close enough to her.
The same pattern continued for some weeks. But then one day the boy didn't come. Kathy shed her first tears after seeing the boy for the first time, and wondered what had happened. She was restless and couldn't even sing like she used to. This was all new to her. What was that feeling inside her that ate her heart like a beast? What was this feeling that made it feel like she'd died if she didn't see the boy again. But she decided to wait a little longer. Just for a little longer.
But when the boy didn't come the next day either, she got really sad and cried a lot that night. The next day she gathered up her courage and decided to go looking for the boy. She went to the attic door, opened it and stepped to the stairs behind it. This was a start of a new adventure and her heart was beating like crazy, but she didn't care.
She walked around the empty halls, they looked like from a school. There was no one around. Then she turned around a corner, and finally, saw him. Kathy's heart started beating faster and faster. She started running onwards, but then suddenly jerked to a stop when she saw a girl next to the boy. This girl had goldbrown curls, and her green eyes were so deep. She looked like the perfect human beign, and Kathy started to back down, not knowing what to do.
The girl wrapped her arms around the boys right arm and gave him a little peck on the cheek. Kathy screamed. She had never screamed before. The voice was high but like a key, not annoying or squeky at all. But this time the boy heard her, and looked at the hall. When he saw nothing, he took his camera and took a quick pic. On the picture there was a blond girl, in a white one piece dress, crying her heart out.
The boy's heart skipped a beat and he yelled a name. Kathy's heart stopped. It was her name. The boy shaked the girl off of his arm and ran to Kathy. He explained that he hadn't had time to visit because of problems at school and home, so much work, but he promised to come see her whenever he could, if she only stopped crying. Kathy smiled and nodded while the boy took another picture.
And from that day on, their love bloomed beautifully, even though they couldn't even touch each other, and Kathy could be seen only through camera, but the boy took a lot of pictures and told her stories, and she sang to him in exchange.
Happy endings are the best, don't you think? ; )
perjantai 1. lokakuuta 2010
My first story here..
So this is my first story for you. It comes straight from my heart, so please tell me what you think.
I'm going to write it in finnish and in english, so that as many as possible understand it, and because I write in finnish, since I'm from Finland, da.
But here it comes:
Meillä oli niin hauskaa yhdessä. Ainakin minun mielestäni. Muistan sen yhdenkin kerran, kun me eksyimme tahalteen ja löysimme sen maagisen paikan. Sanoit minulle ettet ollut aikoihin nauranut niin paljon. Muuttiko sitten sairauteni sen kaiken? Pilasinko ystävyytemme kertomalla sinulle? Jos olisin tiennyt, en olisi kertonut. Mutta halusin olla avoin. Halusin että tiedät minusta mahdollisimman paljon. Mutta niin kuin sanonta kuuluu, tieto tuo tuskaa. Tunnen itseni idiootiksi. Miksei sinulla ole aikaa minulle? Kerro totuus, sillä valhe vain satuttaa enemmän. En tiedä mitä tehdä. En halua menettää sinua, mutta tuntuu kuin ajautuisimme erillemme.. I love you, don't leave me. Please.
We had so much fun together. Or I thought so. I remember that one time, when we got lost on purpose and found that magical place. You said to me you hadn't laughed so much in ages. Did my disease change it all? Did I ruin our friendship by telling you? If I had known, I wouldn't have told. But I wanted to be open. I wanted you to know as much as possible about me. But as the saying goes, knowledge brings pain. I feel like an idiot. Why don't you have time for me? Tell me the truth, because a lie only hurts more. I don't know what to do. I don't want to lose you, but it feels like we're drifting further and further apart.. I love you, don't leave me. Please.
Please tell me what you think? I'd really appreciate it. Thank you!
Katori
I'm going to write it in finnish and in english, so that as many as possible understand it, and because I write in finnish, since I'm from Finland, da.
But here it comes:
Meillä oli niin hauskaa yhdessä. Ainakin minun mielestäni. Muistan sen yhdenkin kerran, kun me eksyimme tahalteen ja löysimme sen maagisen paikan. Sanoit minulle ettet ollut aikoihin nauranut niin paljon. Muuttiko sitten sairauteni sen kaiken? Pilasinko ystävyytemme kertomalla sinulle? Jos olisin tiennyt, en olisi kertonut. Mutta halusin olla avoin. Halusin että tiedät minusta mahdollisimman paljon. Mutta niin kuin sanonta kuuluu, tieto tuo tuskaa. Tunnen itseni idiootiksi. Miksei sinulla ole aikaa minulle? Kerro totuus, sillä valhe vain satuttaa enemmän. En tiedä mitä tehdä. En halua menettää sinua, mutta tuntuu kuin ajautuisimme erillemme.. I love you, don't leave me. Please.
We had so much fun together. Or I thought so. I remember that one time, when we got lost on purpose and found that magical place. You said to me you hadn't laughed so much in ages. Did my disease change it all? Did I ruin our friendship by telling you? If I had known, I wouldn't have told. But I wanted to be open. I wanted you to know as much as possible about me. But as the saying goes, knowledge brings pain. I feel like an idiot. Why don't you have time for me? Tell me the truth, because a lie only hurts more. I don't know what to do. I don't want to lose you, but it feels like we're drifting further and further apart.. I love you, don't leave me. Please.
Please tell me what you think? I'd really appreciate it. Thank you!
Katori
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I've reached a dead end with my story ;__; I was so concentrated on the beginning and the end, that I completely forgot the middle part! :( But I'm working on it, so it'll become finished, someday.. :"D
I'm also trying to think new stories, so that I would have something to write, and tell here about. Maybe next time I'll give you the beginning of my book, if I can't come up with anything better.. We'll see..
Katori
I'm also trying to think new stories, so that I would have something to write, and tell here about. Maybe next time I'll give you the beginning of my book, if I can't come up with anything better.. We'll see..
Katori
maanantai 20. syyskuuta 2010
Death~
I haven't been writing much of stories, just a few, since I last wrote here, but now I have my next "supposedly good" story :D I'll see if I'm good enough to translate it to you for your judgment, though it won't be as good as the original, which I'm sorry for, but I'll do my best with it ^^
The story is about death and a girl that got in the way, and I'll start writing it as soon as I'll get back to the hospital. I'll explaine that later ;)
Katori
The story is about death and a girl that got in the way, and I'll start writing it as soon as I'll get back to the hospital. I'll explaine that later ;)
Katori
sunnuntai 12. syyskuuta 2010
My Dream
My dream has been writing for years, to write for others and for myself. It probably started on the third grade when I started to read books due to a lack of friends. I read a lot of books, I loved them because they were always there.
And now I want to become a real writer, a novelist, and create more and more books that can entertain and bring happiness to many many people!
I know this might sound like a load of just talk, but I can't help it since it's true.
I created this blog to follow my path to what I hope is a good writer, at least, and to share some of my stories with people from around the world.
Now they may seem a little bit odd, but that's only because they have been originally written in finnish and I kinda suck at english ^^" but please bear with me, I really need all the feedback I can get! I'm counting on you! Thank you ^^
Katori
And now I want to become a real writer, a novelist, and create more and more books that can entertain and bring happiness to many many people!
I know this might sound like a load of just talk, but I can't help it since it's true.
I created this blog to follow my path to what I hope is a good writer, at least, and to share some of my stories with people from around the world.
Now they may seem a little bit odd, but that's only because they have been originally written in finnish and I kinda suck at english ^^" but please bear with me, I really need all the feedback I can get! I'm counting on you! Thank you ^^
Katori
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